Hi Jack,
For GlassFish V3 Prelude doc review, you first click [1] to read FishCAT
doc review rule. After
that you can click [2], it list all the GlassFish V3 Prelude docs for
review. [2] is inside [1]
Would you please give this a try to see if you can find the doc you want
to review easily :-)
[1]
http://wiki.glassfish.java.net/Wiki.jsp?page=Docreviewrule
[2]
http://wiki.glassfish.java.net/Wiki.jsp?page=GlassFishDocs
Thanks,
Judy
jack_spallaw wrote:
>Good morining!
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>>I saw you post 7 very good review comments for "QuickStartGuide". Thanks !
>>
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>My pleasure.
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>>You asked about if there is a detail document of "Update Tool". I will
>>ask around.
>>
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>Thank you, and I will keep seeking it too.
>
>As it now stands, I could find the "JavaDB" documentation.
>http://developers.sun.com/javadb/reference/docs/
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>I think, it would be better off written the text below :
>"for detail : http://developers.sun.com/javadb/reference/docs/"
>into the page 7 "Starting and Stopping the Database Server" chapter.
>
>How do you think about this?
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>
>
>>Hi Jack,
>>
>>I saw you post 7 very good review comments for "QuickStartGuide". Thanks !
>>
>>You asked about if there is a detail document of "Update Tool". I will
>>ask around.
>>It would be good to for reviewing :-)
>>
>>Thanks,
>>Judy
>>
>>jack_spallaw wrote:
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>>>Hi Judy,
>>>
>>>I finish to post my comment for "QuickStartGuide".
>>>Please pick it up.
>>>
>>>Thanks
>>>Jack
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>>"If FishCAT members have to sign an SCA to review the unbundled docs,
>>>>then let's allow them to submit issues as an optional alternative."
>>>>
>>>>Hi Survivant, I checked with doc team manager to simplify the FishCAT
>>>>doc review process
>>>>and above is his email reply. You no longer to sign the SCA to review
>>>>the docs, you can just use
>>>>the IssueTracker to log your review comments.
>>>>
>>>>Thanks for following the process. This is one thing I noticed every
>>>>FishCAT member strictly
>>>>following the process which makes FishCAT program so smooth. And we are
>>>>open for suggestion
>>>>to make the process efficient for every one :-)
>>>>
>>>>Thanks,
>>>>Judy
>>>>
>>>>Survivant 00 wrote:
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>>I think that I need an autorization to write on the wiki. That will
>>>>>avoid someone to spam the wiki. I'll wait for further intructions
>>>>>
>>>>>2008/9/16 Judy Tang <Judy.J.Tang_at_sun.com <mailto:Judy.J.Tang_at_sun.com>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Hi Survivant,
>>>>>
>>>>> As an alternative, you can simply file an issue on doc.
>>>>> I confirmed this with doc team manager.
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>> Judy
>>>>> Survivant 00 wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>> thanks.. because I really don't see a edit link even when logged.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> 2008/9/16 Judy Tang <Judy.J.Tang_at_sun.com
>>>>>> <mailto:Judy.J.Tang_at_sun.com>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> After you login, do you see "edit" feature on the bottom.
>>>>>> Will ask doc team to help you if you.
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>> Judy
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Survivant 00 wrote:
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> I log into the wiki.. but where do I edit the page to put my
>>>>>>> comments ?
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> 2008/9/16 Judy Tang <Judy.J.Tang_at_sun.com
>>>>>>> <mailto:Judy.J.Tang_at_sun.com>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> "it's good.", we like to hear this, thanks Survivant for
>>>>>>> reviewing. Your suggestion is very good, would you please
>>>>>>> put in your comment below so doc team will follow up.
>>>>>>> Would like to hear more from other, what you like about
>>>>>>> this doc, what else you like to see in this doc ...
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>http://wiki.glassfish.java.net/Wiki.jsp?page=QuickStartGuide
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>> Judy
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Survivant 00 wrote:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> it's good..
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> can you add a section where to get more advanced
>>>>>>>> settings documentation ?
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> I would like to read the starting guide and when I'm
>>>>>>>> finish to be able to know where I should go to get more
>>>>>>>> information.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> for now, I would like to know where to change the
>>>>>>>> defaults ports, the default password, add listener..
>>>>>>>> it's too advance for the starting guide, but I would
>>>>>>>> like to know where to find it easily.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> You should post screenshot too. Some people are more
>>>>>>>> visual than the others.
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> 2008/9/16 Judy Tang <Judy.J.Tang_at_sun.com
>>>>>>>> <mailto:Judy.J.Tang_at_sun.com>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Hi All,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> I have not seen any review comment back, I wonder
>>>>>>> if you have some time to help us review this doc.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> If you are new to GlassFish, this Quick Start Guide
>>>>>>> is written just for you. In total of 13 pages, you
>>>>>>> learn
>>>>>>> where to get GF V3, how to install it, how to start
>>>>>>> domain, start database, start Admin console, how to
>>>>>>> deploy, undeploy, and run application.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Please get yourself a cup of tea, turn on your
>>>>>>> favorite music, start reading at same time help us
>>>>>>> reviewing this
>>>>>>> doc, after 30 minutes, you will feel you know so
>>>>>>> much about GlassFish :-)
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Here is the way to get this doc:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> (1) Click
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>http://wiki.glassfish.java.net/Wiki.jsp?page=QuickStartGuide
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>>>>>> (2) In the bottom of the page, click "Attachments"
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> (3) In "List of attachments" window, select the pdf
>>>>>>> file
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> (4) In "Image Preview" window, click "Click to load
>>>>>>> attachment", you are all set to review this doc
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thank you in advance for reviewing and we look
>>>>>>> forward to hearing your feedback !
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>>>> Judy
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Gail Risdal wrote:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Hello,
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Just wanted to let you know that an updated
>>>>>>> version of the Quick Start Guide is now
>>>>>>> available for review:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>http://wiki.glassfish.java.net/Wiki.jsp?page=QuickStartGuide
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>>
>>
>>
>>>>>>> Also, just a reminder that doc review
>>>>>>> schedules, guidelines, and other important
>>>>>>> details are on this page:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>http://wiki.glassfish.java.net/Wiki.jsp?page=Docreviewrule
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>>
>>
>>
>>>>>>> Thanks!
>>>>>>> Gail
>>>>>>> +++++
>>>>>>> GlassFish Documentation
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
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