Hi Dixie,
Please find attached my comments for Chapter-15, Administering EIS
Connectivity.
Thanks,
-Jagadish
On Mon, 2009-11-23 at 11:38 -0800, Dixie Pine wrote:
> Greetings,
>
> The FINAL REVIEW draft of the GlassFish Enterprise Server v3
> Administration Guide is available on the comments wiki here:
> http://wiki.glassfish.java.net/Wiki.jsp?page=AdministrationGuide
> If you are named as a To: recipient of this email, you are considered
> a key reviewer of this manual, and I need to hear from you, if only to
> say "looks fine". I have not called out QA reviewers as key reviewers,
> but QA names are on the dashboard. The QA review is definitely as
> important as the dev review. Specific review areas are listed in the
> Reviewer Dashboard here:
> http://wiki.glassfish.java.net/Wiki.jsp?page=GlassFishV3DocPlanAdminGuide#section-GlassFishV3DocPlanAdminGuide-ReviewerDashboard
> There are some holes and possibly wrong names in the dashboard. Let me
> know if corrections are needed.
>
> All comments are due by Tuesday, December 1, 2009.
>
>
> As you can see, there's not much time to review (surprise), so please
> don't delay. Pay special attention to the queries that I have put in
> the doc. Be sure to include the page number in the PDF with each of
> your comments. I'm happy to receive comments in email, comments wiki,
> hardcopy markup, on the phone, face-to-face, whatever works.
> DON'T: Please don't open Issue Tracker issues; takes longer
> for me to process.
> Thanks in advance,
> Dixie
>
>