I've just uploaded another specification draft to the jpa-spec project,
http://java.net/projects/jpa-spec/downloads.
This incorporates the technical changes that I've indicated in recent
email correspondence and other minor fixes (corrections to typos, etc.)
I am planning to hold a concall to address open issues once we have
more of a critical mass of these, and once my schedule frees up a bit.
The changebars are additive from the last draft, as I am not planning
to reset changebars until after we release a milestone draft to the
JCP site.
-Linda