Hi Linda, all,
there is a file lying around here containing some typos and minor
issues discovered in the 2.0 spec after final release. I thought this
might be a good moment to bring them to your attention. References have
been updated to point to the 5/13711 version.
Best regards
Rainer
3.2.4 p. 80
2nd sentence : "involves" instead of "involving"
3.2.6 p. 81
1st sentence : "An entity instance" instead of "A entity instance"
3.7.2 p. 107
What is "update" aiming at for CacheStoreMode USE ?
3.8.10 p. 130
Last paragraph, 1st sentence : I think the word "locking" should be
omitted here.
4.3. p.145
1st bullet : "non-relationship" should be added to both "persistent
field" and "persistent property", I guess, since 2.2, to my
understanding, uses the term persistent field/property for both state
and association fields.
4.6.4 p. 160
2nd paragraph : "or as an update item in the update clause of an update
statement" ought to be added
4.6.6 p. 162
I'd drop "other" from the last sentence
4.8 p. 175
2nd paragraph : To my understanding the first element in the
enumeration should read "an identification variable that ranges over an
entity or embeddable abstract schema type".
6.5.9 p. 298
1st sentence : "An Expression" instead of "A Expression"
6.5.14 p. 305
Second bullet : "as an Expression" rather than "as a Expression"
7.9.1 p. 335
Second bullet on top : "the" instead of "The"
8.2.1.10 p. 349
Example 4 : Why is orm.xml not considered here ? Neither 8.2.1.6 nor
8.2.1.6.2 seem to describe this impact of exclude-unlisted-classes.
9.3. p. 361 2nd paragraph 2nd sentence and 9.3.1 p. 361 3rd paragraph
of javadoc
Either the subject or the predicate requires an ending "s"
9.4.3 p. 366
1st paragraph : Why is createContainerEntityManagerFactory() not
mentioned here ? May the conatiner not override provider defaults ? To
my understanding of 9.5 it may not use the properties of
PersistenceUnitInfo for that purpose since the javadocs require them to
reflect the persistence.xml.
---
Rainer Schweigkoffer SAP AG Walldorf
Business Solution & Technology TD Core JS&I
Technology Development Dietmar-Hopp-Allee 16
Java Server Core D-69190 Walldorf
JEE Implementation Group phone: +49 6227 7 45305
Building 3, I.3.14 fax: +49 6227 7 821177
rainer.schweigkoffer_at_sap.com
Sitz der Gesellschaft/Registered Office: Walldorf, Germany
Vorstand/SAP Executive Board: Werner Brandt, Angelika Dammann,
Bill McDermott (Co-CEO), Gerhard Oswald, Vishal Sikka,
Jim Hagemann Snabe (Co-CEO)
Vorsitzender des Aufsichtsrats/Chairperson of the SAP Supervisory
Board: Hasso Plattner
Registergericht/Commercial Register Mannheim No HRB 350269
Diese E-Mail kann Betriebs- oder Geschaeftsgeheimnisse oder sonstige
vertrauliche Informationen enthalten. Sollten Sie diese E-Mail
irrtuemlich erhalten haben, ist Ihnen eine Verwertung des Inhalts,
eine Vervielfaeltigung oder Weitergabe der E-Mail ausdruecklich
untersagt. Bitte benachrichtigen Sie uns und vernichten Sie die
empfangene E-Mail. Vielen Dank.
This e-mail may contain trade secrets or privileged, undisclosed, or
otherwise confidential information. If you have received this e-mail
in error, you are hereby notified that any review, copying, or
distribution of it is strictly prohibited. Please inform us
immediately and destroy the original transmittal. Thank you for your
cooperation.