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Re: Review Request: GF 3.1 Cluster Infrastructure Resynchronization changes and additions

From: Paul M Davies (Oracle) <"Paul>
Date: Wed, 02 Feb 2011 12:14:42 -0800

Hi John,

Thank you for your interest in reviewing the GlassFish documentation.

Because GlassFish Server Open Source Edition is developed in the open,
documentation for GlassFish Server Open Source Edition is reviewed in
the open. We're using the GlassFish wiki for review comments to simplify
the distribution of review copy and the tracking of comments outside the
firewall.

I have expressly asked writers *not* to duplicate reviews of
documentation for GlassFish Server Open Source Edition on the internal
Oracle Review site because:

    * Comments on the Oracle Review site on this documentation cannot be
      seen by reviewers outside the firewall.
    * Writers have to manage comments on the same documentation from
      multiple sources.

Please use the review wiki for your comments as originally requested.

Thank you.
-Paul


On 02/02/11 11:01, John Clingan wrote:
> Can you post to the internal Oracle Review site as well? easier to
> comment and track other comments.
> Thanks.
>
> On Jan 30, 2011, at 6:42 PM, Paul M Davies (Oracle) wrote:
>
>> Hi,
>>
>> The changes to Synchronizing GlassFish Server Instances and the
>> DAS^<link_attachment_7.gif>
>> <http://wikis.sun.com/download/attachments/216526465/instance-resync.pdf?version=1&modificationDate=1296440856945>
>> in Chapter 4, Administering GlassFish Server Instances in the High
>> Availability Administration Guide resulting from the GF 3.1 Cluster
>> Infrastructure project are now available for review.
>>
>> Please review this chapter to ensure that it is correct and complete.
>> The deadline for comments is end of day *Friday, February 4th, 2011*.
>>
>> Mandatory reviewers for this section are listed in the /High
>> Availability Administration Guide/ Changes
>> <http://wikis.sun.com/display/GlassFish/GlassFish+Server+Open+Source+Edition+3.1+Cluster+Infrastructure+Documentation+Review#GlassFishServerOpenSourceEdition3.1ClusterInfrastructureDocumentationReview-HighAvailabilityAdministrationGuideChanges>
>> section of the review wiki page.
>>
>> Because this section is new, changes are *not* marked.
>>
>> Please provide your feedback by adding a comment to the review wiki
>> page
>> <http://wikis.sun.com/display/GlassFish/GlassFish+Server+Open+Source+Edition+3.1+Cluster+Infrastructure+Documentation+Review>.
>> To simplify the processing of your comments, please add your comments
>> in the format in the sample comment. Review existing comments to see
>> known issues and avoid duplicates.
>>
>>
>> Thank you.
>>
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