Hi,
Attached for review is the generate-jvm-report(1) man page, which I have
updated as follows:
* Fixed Issue 5162
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https://glassfish.dev.java.net/issues/show_bug.cgi?id=5162>
* Added information about --type=log as introduced by Issue 5803
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https://glassfish.dev.java.net/issues/show_bug.cgi?id=5803>
* In the Synopsis section, moved the [/target/] operand to after
--type and formatted it to indicate that it is a placeholder
Please also review the Description section, as some things there seem
incongruous to me:
* "Domain Administration Service" looks like it should be "Domain
Administration Server".
* The sentence: "This command replaces the traditional techniques
like sending ctrl+break or kill -3 signals to application
server processes." seems unrelated to the purpose of this command.
* The sentence "The command will not work if the target server
instance is not running." sounds like it should be supplemented or
maybe even replaced by the statement:"This command is supported in
remote mode only.
Please give me your feedback by end of day on Thursday.
Thanks!
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Paul Davies, Senior Technical Writer, Sun Microsystems, Inc.
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