Would also like to add my thanks to Manfred. Looking forward to read
your part 2 and 3,
very valuable input !
Thanks,
Judy
Gail Risdal wrote:
> Thanks, Manfred! Appreciate your thorough review and attention to docs.
>
> Gail
>
> Manfred Riem wrote:
>
>> Application Deployment Guide
>>
>>
>>
>> Page 30
>>
>> 1. Why not also include Java EE 6 Tutorial II here also (like
>> in the Quick Start Guide).
>>
>>
>>
>> Page 36
>>
>> 1. 1 JSR 88 Deployment is a deployment mechanism implemented
>> based on the JSR 88 standard
>> from jcp.org. It delivers vendor neutral deployment options.
>>
>> 2. Degradation will most definitely be there.
>>
>>
>>
>> Page 37
>>
>> 1. How is the rolling upgrade done? Is that explained later in
>> the document?
>>
>> 2. Does each deployment descriptor have a DTD or are there now
>> descriptors that use a schema?
>> “Each deployment descriptor XML file has a corresponding Document
>> Type Definition (DTD) file”
>>
>>
>>
>> Page 44
>>
>> 1. “In this case, the administrator edits and reassembles the
>> archive.” Isn’t it better to use a
>> deployment plan instead of editing the WAR/EAR/RAR?
>>
>>
>>
>> Page 45
>>
>> 1. “Sun Glassfish Enterprise Server v3 Preview Reference
>> Manual” I assume the “Preview” part
>> needs to be dropped here?
>>
>>
>>
>> Page 55
>>
>> 1. Is “JRuby” a valid type for the server?
>>
>>
>>
>> Page 58
>>
>> 1. “Note – This task is best suited for use in a development
>> environment.” I don’t think that is the
>> case here. A deployment plan looks to me like a good candidate for
>> production deployments.
>>
>>
>>
>> Page 60
>>
>> 1. TBW – I guess content is missing here?
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> These are today’s pages.
>>
>>
>>
>> Manfred
>>
>>
>>
>> *From:* Judy.J.Tang_at_Sun.COM [mailto:Judy.J.Tang_at_Sun.COM]
>> *Sent:* Thursday, October 01, 2009 5:20 PM
>> *To:* quality_at_glassfish.dev.java.net
>> *Subject:* More GlassFish v3 documents for review
>>
>>
>>
>> Hi All,
>>
>> The following GlassFish v3 documents have priority for review. Please
>> review these first. Looking
>> forward to get your review feedback !
>>
>> * Administration Guide click
>>
>> <http://wiki.glassfish.java.net/attach/AdministrationGuide/SJSASEEAG.pdf>
>>
>> * Quick Start Guide (unbundled version; /if possible, reviews needed
>> by October 6, 2009/) click
>>
>> <http://wiki.glassfish.java.net/attach/QuickStartGuide/SJSASEEQSG.pdf>
>> * Application Development Guide (formerly Developer's Guide) click
>>
>> <http://wiki.glassfish.java.net/attach/DeveloperSGuide/SJSASEEDG.pdf>
>> * Application Deployment Guide click
>>
>> <http://wiki.glassfish.java.net/attach/ApplicationDeplyomentGuide/SJSASEEADG.pdf>
>>
>>
>>
>> [1] Doc review rule:
>> http://wiki.glassfish.java.net/Wiki.jsp?page=Docreviewrule
>>
>> Happy Reviewing :-)
>> Judy
>>
>
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