Hi Kedar,
Thank you for this feedback. I have incorporated all your comments.
Attached the updated version FYI.
Regards,
-Paul
On 09/23/08 11:34, Kedar Mhaswade wrote:
> Paul,
>
> This manpage is grossly out-of-date. Here are some comments:
>
> - Change --domaindir to say [--domaindir domain folder's parent folder]
> - --profile option is unsupported for Prelude, --template too. In
> general,
> downplay on the profile related conversation in the entire manpage.
> - Remove all the examples that use --profile and replace them with
> current
> ones.
> - Change the --keytooloptions description as below:
>
> Specifies an optional list of name-value pairs of keytool options for
> a self-signed server certificate generated during create-domain process.
>
> Each pair in the list must be separated by the ':'.
> The following properties are *respected*:
> CN - Specifies the common name of the host that is to be used for the
> self-signed certificate.
>
> This option name is case insensitive.
>
> By default, the value for CN is same as fully qualified name of the
> machine where the create-domain command is run.
>
> (Also, show the usage of this option in the examples section).
>
> - Mention somewhere that not all ports are required for Prelude. This is
> a carry-over from V2 (don't say that :)).
>
> Thanks!
>
> -Kedar
>
>
> Paul Davies wrote:
>> Hi,
>>
>> Please review the fixes for Issue 6199 in the attached copy of the
>> create-domain(1M) man page. This issue is a result of the addition of
>> --keytool to fix Issue 5722
>> <https://glassfish.dev.java.net/issues/show_bug.cgi?id=5722>.
>>
>> The fixes are marked with change bars.
>>
>> Please provide your feedback by end of day Wednesday September 23, 2008.
>>
>> Thank you.
>>
>> --
>> Paul Davies, Senior Technical Writer, Sun Microsystems, Inc.
>> http://blogs.sun.com/techscribe/
>>
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