Hi Jennifer,
Thank you for your comments, which I have processed.
> I was also reviewing the Release Notes and it looks good.
Thanks again!
> I don't think 'Using the Bundled Java DB Database' section belongs in the
> Hardware and Software Requirements.
ACCEPT: I have moved this section out from under Hardware and Software
Requirements.
> Also, I'm not sure if Java DB will be bundled. Jerome, Dinesh, or Sahoo
> - can you clarify?
DISCUSS: In response to a comment from another reviewer, I have avoided
this issue by saying "available for use with" instead of "bundled with".
Regards,
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